I recently commented on a post written by
Cynthia Oviedo saying that I agreed with her in supporting the expansion of the
MetroRail bus route. However, I just learned that the state is experiencing an
approximate $27 billion financial shortfall. Texas is experiencing very
difficult times in determining our new budget. This new information as well as
Allison Garrett’s post has led me to change my mind about the MetroRail bus
route expansion.
Allison starts
by quickly making her stance on the issue very clear. She is in support of the
expansion but puts emphasis on strategic timing. Allison then continues by
mentioning that with our financial shortfall Texas “should be focused on
cutting spending, and raising revenue, not expanding a transit system that
relies on state funding.” I appreciate that she quickly chose her side of the
fence on the issue because it helps me and other readers to grasp her opinions
more easily. Also, her opinion is important because it helps me to understand
her point of view as I continue reading and then allows me to choose to support
or oppose her thoughts.
Allison
mentions that “the transit would charge relatively high fees to use” but
doesn’t provide an exact or estimated dollar-amount. I understand that exact
numbers would be difficult to provide but if she would have provided estimates
or old reports then it would have made her opinion more credible. It would have
also helped to grasp the reader’s attention because numerical data always
stands out.
Also, she
mentions that driving is a cheaper option and I really do not agree with her
here. Perhaps commuting may be cheaper for drivers of small and economic
vehicles but that isn’t the case for all Austinites. Allison should have
thought her statement out better to realize that the bus is a cheaper option
for drivers of larger, gas-guzzling vehicles. This more-inclusive statement
would illustrate that she has taken the time to think about the issue and has
considered different points of view.
When Allison
mentions that “the transit only averages 450-500 riders per day…” she took the
time to provide a link to her source of information. I really appreciate this
because it adds to her credibility and makes her opinion more dependable.
I definitely
agree with Allison’s overall opinion that Texas should wait for our economy to
stabilize before forking out millions of dollars to expand the MetroRail bus
route. However, there were certainly statements that should have been
better-worded to show that she considered different scenarios. However, I do
wish that she would have provided me with more numerical data when mentioning
the cost to board the bus to help me visualize the impact of our American
dollar. Allison’s editorial was very interesting to read and she made very
valid points in which she brought the budget to my attention when I had
supposedly already decided to support the expansion.